agreed wit most of what ^^^ said. people always think ur off beat when ya string lines out across bars. n ya, u should raise the vocal level just a bit. but u got a smooth flow.

would like to see u come a bit harder wit the lyrics on a non-personal/emotional track. good shit though.

stay up........

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