Dark Force fucked this up...

Better everything, really...

Structure, better.
Punches, alot better
Wordplay, again, better
Flow, better
Closer, eh...but still managed to be better.
Best line also...that "condom/confessional" line made me laugh.

Tight verse, man.

Split, add more to ya shit...
No one likes stretched lines...
But, come on.
Make em at least have substance.

Peace

Holla back on this...
Need your vote!

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