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Old 12-31-03, 01:01 PM   #2
Antonio Banderas
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The good - These is a mediocre writing.... It rhymed in places.....

The bad - Try to organize ur bars one by one. Ur current writing is jumbled up...... By seperating ur bars, ppl can read ur verses alot easier...

3.8/10.... Keep elevating dogg....
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