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Originally posted by ClassX
Good piece but very basic.. I could see this goin well with maybe an audio according to its flow.. No real eye opening funny punchs or witty wordplay but you did ur thing nontheless..return the favor dawg.. peace
SOE HOLLA
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^^^ What he said....
Also, some parts of ur verse didn't rhyme...Good effort though....
2.9/10.....
Keep tying them and add some vocab to ur verse....