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Old 12-31-03, 01:20 PM   #11
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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illest alive
You havent battled in 4 monthz? that dont make a difference/cuz you still as whack as you came and i'll prove it wit MetaPhysiks//
6/10

cuz my rapz are scientifical wit sort of a political twist/and tha only "Xplizit" about you is that your rapz aint "SHIT"//
[b]6/10

you been here for over five monthz and its gotta be embarassin/when i make people forget about you just like your parentz did//
6/10

i'm underrated like a porno wit a PG ratin on it/you lack a hook like a fishin pole when JUST string and bate is on it//
5/10

i'm just enterin my prime and you LIE like Pathological/my ass aint from "Houston" but my rhymez are ASTRO-nomical//
7/10


nearly all your lines started off ill, but then you second line of every bar let u down!!

overall 30/50



metaphysik
This kids dope, the only way you make hott bars is burning soap//
Punches leave you hanging for your life like "high fives" playing wit rope//
7/10

Your life exceeded its limits like websites wit unpaid bills over their date//
Your not great, looking directly ahead is the only time kid sees straight//
7/10

Punches leave you lost for breath like you misplaced your lungs//
Your spit has dried up like putting cotton slabs on your tongue//
6/10

I could touch your post and I still couldnt feel your flow//
This kid blows, making pizzas is the only time you stack dough//
6.5/10

Your "not into" long term relations like open mouths wit no dicks on dudes//
Like you misplaced your Guess Who game the way you lost a match you lose//
6/10

overall 32.5/50




my vote metaphysiks
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