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Old 12-31-03, 02:08 PM   #19
Soulfire
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From: Brooklyn, NY
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Yo, this battle fuckin sucked. But anyway,

J Goodz: Yo, get your structure together for real. Wordplay was decent, but punches were mad weak. Personals were weak too.

Payce: Yo, you got good structure and some decent punches, but your wordplay is kinda weak. Personals were kinda weak too.

Vote: Payce

But on the real, this battle seem more like a fuckin' Jerry Springer show than a real battle. Don't get too close to your opponent or it makes your punches seem like crap. Oh and try not to always seem like you yellin' at each other. RB's about rhymin', not fightin'.