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Old 12-31-03, 03:42 PM   #21
PaDDyMaN
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OPener ---- Tie but none really
closer ---- Yo whut up
Punches----Yo whut up
Structure----soulfire ---- it was jus easier to read
metas//similes----Yo whut up
Soulfire your shit rhymed, but you didnt fuck him up enough, get personal even though u dont know this kid u gotta fucken talk mad shitttttt using metaphors, just remember that, create imagery for the audience and metaphors------vote-----whut up-----------go return the favor at PaddyMan vs Kuntryboi part TWO and Paddyman vs illestspitta ----- i just need them closed thanks