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Old 12-31-03, 05:52 PM   #12
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hmm interesting battle...

QUOTABLES:

Yu Bin SunD

Shawn Rainy Sorry This Is A Battle..Not A Contest Of Who Can Pleasure Dicks..(his aim)
My Skillz Like Broken Rulers..Son You Can't Measure It..

that was the only line close to being original in ya whole verse, as it had a personal in it, as what ima say next might be a shock...

im hoping that your just using loads of played lines in ya verse, but ive got a suspicion that youve been biting various lines from battles, cos all the rest of your lines have been played out since last year, and i know you didnt just happen to think of all them played lines at once... but based on the lyrics, too much played shit, lacked originality, this verse might have been tight 2 years ago when the line were original...


Tha Duce

nothing great from ya verse, like a quotable that stood out, but you had a consistant verse, some nice idea's but you didnt really flip them that well, they could of been a lot harder punches...
i couldnt really dig ya rhyme scheme, as you had an on and off flow, and multi's just chucked in everywhere... but your content didnt suffer from it, so it didnt really matter for text battles...



this is a hard battle to call... id give flow and maybe just edging out personals to Yu Bin SunD, but give originaliy and creativity of the whole verse to The Duce, as Yu Bin SunD had soooooo much played shit, i wouldnt even take it into account as his verse...

a tough call, but i feel The Duce had this...




Yu Bin SunD, you need to come with original idea's, not looking thru old battles and using lines you think are good, when the line has been donce once, or twice maximum, thats it, let it go... you really suffered, cos your whole verse was played lines, and just a couple lines that seemed directed at ya opponent...








and dont reply in here bitching about acusing you of biting, cos i could easily find evidence to all them lines that are played, but you just wording it different, im well known for catching biters, so dont test me with that i dont know what im saying...
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