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This was a good piece here man....real emotionaly drop....you always seem to drop emotional pieces lol....you had nice multies through out the piece....Petey needs to take a lesson in multies..lol wtf is he saying about it didnt rhyme lol fucking dumbass....but it did rhyme nicely and you structured it good, your chorus was alright overall it was a good read....keep up the good work
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