Ohh well if its better sung then it must be awesome, because this is good poetry. The flow was perfect, and the rhyme wasnt forced at all. Very creatively written, and your use of vocab was original and refreshing.
I particularily liked the last stanza-

as we grow and mature, it all stabs clear
we never listen anymore, all we do is hear

These lines really stood out to me.
Great write.. Happy Holidays. T

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