dude this was a piece of shit. Im not trying to hate but you will never make it trying to do stuff like this. I didnt even have to read it all to know that. Im an intern for babygrande records and let me tell you just from what ive seen if you are serious about your flows you need get serious with what you write. This just looks like you're trying to be deep. you cant try you have to just fucking do it. elevate everything. dont give up, thats the pusy way out