a topic done many times, yet the saddness always tends to pull me in, also the fact that everyone always seems to have different ways of putting theres, or another way to look at the situation. i felt the intro could be better, it started of with lines you read in tons of poems. but it does get better, its just simple thou, which once in awhile isnt a bad thing. your emotion clear. try to use your own imangiary more. nice read.

~Tera~
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