this i enjoyed! mostly how simple it seems to be, but how far the depth goes when you actually take time to think about it. i cant wait to hear it sung. it seems everything about it was simple, the structure, the words, the rhyme scheme, except for the message, which work beauty for this piece! your intro was my favorite part, because when it comes to intros i tend to be picky, and this one passed for me! beautifully told

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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