Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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that took awhile! but it was well worth the long read. it seemed more like a story when i was reading it, coz i got so caught up in it that i forgot about flow and all the jazz. you did a wonderful job describing details, and had a strong vocab in there. i liked the way you started this piece, brought us into it.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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