Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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i liked this for it was different. with a different message, but a strong one. you explained yourself pretty well, and made it understandable. it was short, and could be built onto more. with more detail, but the detail you did give was well written, just needs more.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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