GaZeBo

Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/
Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/

Dope wordplay

Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/
And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/

....Ok...not great


It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/
When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/

Kinda weak...


Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/
Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/

Wordplay...


See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/
There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul/

Straight...needs work
Ya wordplay was pretty good
Punches need work
Structure was a lil bit off...
Overall 15/20



Metaphysik

Aight check it

Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway//
Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed//

Wordplay..decent punch

Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded//
Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it//

Straight punch...wordplay...flow a lil off

Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"//
Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey//

Wordplay...decent punch...creative

Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships//
Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips//
...Hmmm...kinda weak

Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves//
This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved//
LoL...pretty funny..dope punch
Verse was pretty good
Punches need ta hit a bit harder
Good with tha wordplay
Some points were creative
Overall 17/20

Metaphysik edged this one....
It was pretty close...
But GaZeBo didn't come much with punches

Vote-Metaphysik

PS...DONT PUT EXPLANATIONS ANYMORE

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