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Old 01-01-04, 05:11 AM   #9
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Aight this was obvious.....

Structure-Verstyle
Flow-Tie
Punches-Verstyle
Wordplay-Verstyle
Multies-Neither
Creativity-Nither

oCANti........Ya need better structure
Ya need to work up punches too....
Flow was decent... but ya need higher vocab

Verstyle
Ya verse was pretty dope.....
Lines a lil stretched...But it was dope
Good work homie......Props...


VOTE-Verstyle
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