^ Word.

The topic itself was fucking gay. At times the flow in this was off to me because the lines were too long syllable-wise, but you seemed to have an understanding of what you wanted to say, and got it across quite well .. the multie's came together nice as i read, it could of used internals to tighten it flow wise i guess .. but the content wasn't bad, nothing great, but it wasn't bad.

You've got the potential there.

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