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IP:
you define your own name, 'a supreme emsee'
yet soon you will start again, with version three
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5/10 I liked the opener but the finish was kinda off you could have hit harder
what do you hope to gain, from makin a battle list
maybe when you lose them all, you mite just get the jist
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8/10 I seen that list so that was a good personal liked that
your birthday is set to 'N/A', what, werent you ever born
u must av come from a test-tube, thats y ur all weak and forlorn
8/10 also a very good personal and ended with a good punch
if this was a boxin match, 'Freeman' against 'Carson'
ud be hangin on the ropes, even more than 'Tarzan'
Decent but it didnt really rhyme at the end, so i'd give it a 4/10
its time for the murder to be committed... goodbye CarsonJet
here's a fully loaded gun, now go and play 'Russian Roulette'
9/10 very good finisher i liked the way you worded it and it was a really hard line
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CARSON
Freeman? how can u even think to spit?-ur literally shit
check his pic^^look!^^he aint even black witta invert pitch
6/10 Because I thought I've heard that similer line before.
Not sure if i have but it sounds familier
Livin off ya ryhmes? he can't even afford a closet.he came outta a drawer
For sure-Freeman? he came to battle me but gotta better a tour of the floor
7/10 you flipped that punch well and it hit pretty hard
Not even a chore ima give it to him just like that 1-4 newbie did
He think's he ^^ripped it^^when lipid's the only phat on this kid
8/10 that was a pretty hard line and flowed nicely
Freeman's simply dreamin-it's clear as day just keep on readin
See jet an think that u can beat him?only if ya mouth can take 5 creamin
6/10 the flow was off and it wasnt that hard of a punch
Honestly I mean whats he thinkin..he's from birmingham alabama
your six days late and still u couldn't get this vic from santa
3/10 i didnt like that at all i'd only give it points for flow because he isnt from there so really thats trying tobe a personal
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CARson...30
freeman...34
Good batle but i felt freeman took this but good luck to both ye pz
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