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Old 01-01-04, 11:14 AM   #26
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CarsonJet
Ok verse.. some nice punches..
Did well flippin' some..& nice personals..
Good use of creativity.. N wit..
Openin' bar was very nice.. props.
You could've packed more though..&
Your flow was shakey at points..
Overall Ok-Good..

Freeman
Basically everythin u did good..Carson did better..
You had some nice punches aswell..
Less use of wordplay etc though..
Stronger flow, yet less punches..
Overall Ok-Good

vote CarsonJet


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