ok look here's the deal......

you don't bold your whole battle or any of it for that matter...it get's really stupid and makes people not even want to read it-

wit that said......
penny wise u tore the multi's up....but thats it...other wise ur verse lacked punches flo-meti's and structure for that matter....the style is wak...kill-the-dashes-all-over-the-place...

overall....alias came in witta better battle verse along with alot funnier an wittier wordplay and stronger vocab...his structure was much better and flo on key.....overall he murked this kid-

my vote- alias......penny learn and elevate....view other battles