Ok let me break it down. I'll break deacon's first and then come back in about 30 and hit 13th's then vote seeing as how I'm veeerrryy busy.

But anyways..

Deacon- Beat is.. ehhh. I dunno I realize it's for humor but thus far the parody isn't even funny. Alright verse has kicked in. Flow is decent. Punches are blah. Very few and far between. And weak. No offense that's just the part of the verse you needta work on. Ahh.. fell off beat a few times. Rushed some lines to fit. This wasn't a very good verse man. Sorry. I realized you went for the humor impact. But for the humor to work it has to be good ya know ? 2.5/5 <-- Rating for the audio

13th- *I'll get to this in about 30*

Vote- *Read the above lol*

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