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Old 01-01-04, 02:29 PM   #10
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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petrafy
Im so sadystic sumtimes I wonder where my mind went//
So I throw punches at ya back to knock ya spine out of alignment//
6/10

Im known to rattle rappers who think theres no consequence//
Ill put yo brain on your glass jaw so I can shatter your confidence//
6/10

my lines make your mind blank leavin you in anguish n sorrow//
my lines are copyrighted……its shit you cant borrow//
5/10

propelled explosive ordinance delivered to ya present-coordinates //
Peg n sink dis bitch ova the grid like we playin battleship//
5/10

This fag is catching feelings so I had to numb your fear//
Your ass must be Greek cuz you let them Trojans in your rear//
3/10

bad wordplay let u down!!!


overall 25/50



virtusso
Speakin Pre-verbally-wrecked, like it was historically-texted,
Should be warning-wats-next, HA… u ain’t got no groupies to be mourning-ya-dealth,
6/10

Start showin-respect, drawin the lines-are-fine, ur aight… but u can’t Text-wit-mine
It’s a part-of-my-mind, how I leave u like ur fuckin name……….Pet~rified…
5/10

In lines-u-lied, I’ll turn-ya-a-sinner, couldn’t have six names an vote just to Make-u-a-winner
I’ll be servin these sick sermon’s…while you’ll be…..Servin-me-dinner…
4/10[/b]

Ur style~is~thinner, PREFECTED-so-eas~a~ly, I connect-‘till‘~ya-see,
Ur verse was nice..umm… but nothing in it was direct~ed-to-me…. (no personals)
6/10

Im textin~disease, Mimickin Mrs. Cleo u couldn’t Blame-or-hex-me, spittin game-wit-textcees,
How u supposed to WIN battles when u can’t spell your name-correctly!!! (petrify ~is Petrify)
5/10



overall 26/50


my vote virtuso
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