^weak battle from both....first dude came aight, your opener was played as hell, the rest of your verse was choppy with no real flow and your punches weren't hittin that hard, try rewordin it next time.......you did have punches tho and they hit (not hard) but they hit.....

second dude ya shit was underpar, you were capitalizin words that didn't even make a reference to each other....when you do shit like that your words are s'posed to intertwine....it's played out but that's your style so do it right.....your punches were practically none existent and the violence in verses is kinda played out....and you used it in almost every line.....keep workin at it....

vote Paddyman for a better verse....

please return the fav on my battle.......sorry i'm not eligible to poll vote yet, but i'd appreciate it...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139