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Originally posted by BoyWonder
yo im sorry...but i did not like this piece 1 bit...to be honest i got bored after reading the second line...if u wanna be a hot rapper u gotta make tha reader anxious to get to tha next line u know....and i mean there was nuff lines dat didnt even rhyme...work on it...alot
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Yeah man, you verse barely rhymed.... The flow was cool, butya gotta ryhme your words dogg....