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Old 01-01-04, 05:01 PM   #1
PaYce
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This is my battle against PostMan...can somebody please explain to me on how I lost this battle.

Imma disperse of ya prewrittens...like a vulture to flesh
Ur shits played but im like Wendys...Now tell me whos fresh!
Checked his audios...played punches...even the verse he posted after me had sum played punches...Wendy's quote "Always fresh".

Ur first loss on rapbattles...is wat u now will achieve,
I got X in the ballet boxes...but u cry n grieve......
...cuz ur still beggin on gettin.........X box live for free!
Notice...X-in-ballot-boxes=x-box...He posted in Emcee Interaction asking on how to get Xbox live for me.

U musta typed ur verse in french...cuz im deeply fryin it
But u decoded n posted in english...while decodin aliases!
He posted in Emcee Interaction sayin he was exposin aliases

Postin tracks in ya sig...claminin they get radio playin...
Only exposure u ever get...Is on the whack music station!
In his sig...it says sumthin like..."Go here for track that gets radio play"

U can call me Barry Bonds...Im stealin ya fan-cliche (like a group)
cuz Its Home-where-ur-Runnin...from my Giant-like hits!
Notice...Barry Bonds steals a lot of bases...He has the home run record...and he plays for the giants

Ur name the postman...but now that name is bein revoked...
Once I drop my verse...ur guh run cuz ur to scared to post!
Rippin his name...

The voters say that I had no personals...and that my verse was basic...I didn't think I needed an insane amount of multies when I had tons of wordplay...


Heres his verse
"No avatar selected" so i cant clown ya face,
but lyrically you lackin, cant keep up the paYce,
and if your text is wack, the chances of audio bein good,
is as likey as YungP stayin in the hood,
dont be fooled, hes not hot, "hes mild",
i'll shit on ya writtin, and wipe my ass with ya "keystyle",
ya first to dickride, So you should know how cum "taste",
but Everyone knows the ones on FRONTLINE are the first to take shots to the "face",
true at text im wack, but at audio im considered "dope",
you on the other hand are like bobs friends, Just no "hope"
garbage is more than enuogh credit than you deserve
this is my first battle, but like they say, First come first serve


Can I get sum hoenst feedback plz...kinda stumped on how I lost here....heres the actual thread...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102779
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