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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP:
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Originally posted by Vitalz
he agreed to battle the best and the greatest//
i knock tha pube hair off ya chest stop whackin it//
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Decent Opener.
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Originally posted by Vitalz
to fully clothed bitches on trading spaces//
ya neva gonna be like Tupac Shakur//
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No Sense.
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Originally posted by Vitalz
Put the keyboard down ya shit couldnt shock a ford//
U couldnt have me stocked shot or mocked by some trial rappers//
they some style slackers with Hugh Flinks laughter//
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Scheme Changed. Not Flowin.
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Originally posted by Vitalz
Fans dissappearing mamma's dont care//
they hatchin you to recieve a higher welfare//
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Whack Like P-Diddy.
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Originally posted by Vitalz
hes the fat kid who loves the cake he rocks the mic//
so can afford to support his ass with a klondike//
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50 Bitten.
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Originally posted by Vitalz
come on mike get in the game ya dont know how much ya lack//
you couldnt get in hittin wit ken griffeys b-ball bat//
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Finally a Punch. 
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Originally posted by Vitalz
fill ya khakis full of toxic gasses you in the back seat//
Plastic bag over your head to shed ya constant fear of conflict//
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Horrible Closer.
Your Scheme Need Work, Structure Is Whack. Get Rid of Those // After Every Line. It's Annoying. Check Out Whackness Emergency Center And Read Some Of The Tuturials. There Are Alot Of Good Tips And Vet's In There To Help You.
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Originally posted by What mic
Record 0-0.. oh shit that makes you the best?
Invest in a dictionary, it'l teach you the rest
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Decent Opener.
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Originally posted by What mic
And I suggest you learn to rhyme, don't waste my time
If this is how you text battle you must speak like a mime
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Good Punch. Nice Delivery.
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Originally posted by What mic
I'ma make you an offer that you can't resist
I'll leave you with my old record in exchange for a kiss
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Continue The Onslaught.
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Originally posted by What mic
But before you get all hard I'ma tell it like this
Pucker up and kiss my ass cuz you my new bitch
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Yup. Good Punch.
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Originally posted by What mic
And I do like to whack off to Trading spaces
Get right up in the TV screen and aim for they faces
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I Hate Feeding. But This Was Funny.
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Originally posted by What mic
You happy now? You fucking clown- you ahouldnt of asked
And for the record while im doin it i slap my own ass
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Meh.
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Originally posted by What mic
Ill pass on dissin you, shit you said it yourslef
Give it up bitch please and keep that shit on the shelf
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Dope Closer.
Good Verse. Why Your 0-1 I Have No Clue. Keep Elevatin. Got Good Potential.
Vote: What mic. E-z.
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I Speak Out
Battles
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Fuck Bruklor aka Self.
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