you have this unique way a writing it seems. you leave your poems so simple, short lines, small words, but its so complex and tends to hold such a strong feeling and message to it.

your intro was nicely written, it caught my eye right away. and not once throu the poem did my interest fail, you kept me glued to your words. your outro was nicely done too. with simple poems theres never much to say. but this was one good piece, i'll still watch for more.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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