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Old 01-01-04, 11:02 PM   #8
TRIBAL
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bios verse

Check the due date,..He will Loose his statues when Midnight Passes..
I knew Lethal Scriptures were a bunch of Princess Rappers...
I seen your member pic Im not racist, So I stay eating Crackers...
Cataclsymic setting the demise of this Infant....Name starts off
with an $....but U cant be large.....because U hold no weight broke emcee
can't drop golden Bars.....Which makes u and ya name just -Paper-..
and watch as I -Rip this Plain White Rapper-.....Drift a punch to this punk...
leaving him with one -Black- Eye....Got him viewing things while Colored blind...
and watch as I bleed this Emcee and -Smoke this Tree-..Now I got him feeling
-Jungle Fever-...Now Spitacular is another Eminem...A white emcee who got dissed by another
African American...


tight battle:
pounches--were pretty hard used some personals like the eminem crack and member
good structre--pretty good flow but could use some work
metas were also used



$pitacular verse

fuckin Dick, Urine trouble.... and I ain't even Pissed
how you a-Dress me... it's like you're Young P's alias
fucked up ya Name.... you forgot to leave out the "o"
Crooklyn? shit I smoke you... like you rep Marl-Burrow
I shine bright sucka.... LOL..... cuz God didn't Tint Me
my punches hit to ya Heart... yours are only Skin Deep
plus just like a fag... Asshole wanted a Piece of Me
my idols spit Fat rhymes.... your idol died of Obesity
"Professional Drawing Artist"... redundant retardee
lucky you an Accountant... cuz you don't Count on RB


battle vote:
hard pounching opener dissin his name (pounch+personal)
more pounches and personals using his profile

overall since pounches and personals are wat count on any battle i gotta give my vote to $pitacular

vote on battles in my sig i took the time you should to

peace