Locks, you have to change up your style a bit.... I don't konw if you're used to battling verbally but it just doesn't look right when its text.

Then again, " [S].uicidal [T.]ransgression [D].isease/(STD)" doesn't make sense regardless of how you present it.

If I could vote I'd go w/ Doze on ths one.



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