Guess I'll break this one down:

[Hit the john and shook my dick... and suprise High was left pissed...
Man you'll never be able to handle my bars... like a unicyclist]

Eh, ok I guess

[Against the vets you shouldnt stand up... or like against Pana you bound to fall...
Left beaten and bruised with straight headshots... like them photo booths in malls]

The headshots idea is funny.

[Where'd you get the nerve... with that record you cant hang with the best...
And I'd say your verses were hot... dog... but they're more of a sausage fest]

This had potential but you could have done more with it than "sausage fest." Still good though

[Today's gotta be your day... After I'm done ya eyes will truly shine...
Then watch as you get laughed off stage... like successful sets at Carolines]

ok.

[I know you should post first but I couldnt wait dude...
Cause I'd fall asleep...
...I mean ya so boring a dail-tone would hang up on you]

ha, ok, I like it... and I know the feeling.

Overall a very good verse but I think it could have been worded a little better in some places.


[I kick Femes, skip Seeds and destroy Chrits Dreams
Your Rank Gleams???
This Bitch only notice Shine when he is kissen this Ring ( My Ring )]

I hate this pseudo-mafioso bullshit.

[Depress-ion after this battle, is what you'll be Left-in
Apart of my sonning Collection...
With all of your Dick ryders, Porno must be your profession]

Nope, sorry, doesn't work.

[So stay Aside, dont Imprivise and try to win this by Bribes
You and skill collide??? Yea right, and Pigs Fly]

Eh, ok.

[Your signature Fiction, please loose your weak Visions
His punches simply Friction...
Your prayers no longer work, I suggest switchen Religions]

His punches are friction? what the fuck?

[This is just the caption, So keep ya seat-belt Fascend
Eyes left Blackend... But that pussy of yours always ready for Action
I stay Vicious, Leaving people like you scared Shit-less
The future is going Down under...
No longer delicous, didnt know crew's started raoming in heards of Bitches ( Wits End )]

Its just not as good as Chrits verse, plain and simple. Two things to notice - Chrit actually made sense... and he looks like he can spell at more than a fourth grade level.


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