Kaveh

yo,ill hit wit dirvate inflictions leave ya existance useless like infinate loners,
hip-hop101 "never drops hard" like unfinished boners,
ima implode explosives in ya back till ya spine and neck is gone,
youll never see gold like blind lephracuns,
so you might as well retire,
the only way youll spit heat is if you light yourself on fire,
listen,this guy thinks hes going to be a dang vet,
i bang sets wit slang threats,and leave him in a pool of blood like gang bets,
i kill you so fast you wouldnt have time to die,
ill lay you in ya coffin and let the preist close ya eyes,
you couldnt "tell ya future" if you had "ms.cleo in ya mind",
stuntin ya spine,cuz this kid will have to "think deep" like i "punctured his mind",
ill stay messin ya lines,ill stick "clovers in ya rib cage" and maybe youll have "luck on your side",
and yo you think you hip-hop,you must be insane,
you couldnt get "hot thoughts" if you were "cooking ya brain".


Kaveh... ya had some played lines
Punches didnt' really hit hard
Vocab pretty good...Wordplay was straight
Just work on Punches, Personals, and Structure
And i think you'll be on the right track...
Overall...........12/20



HipHop101

Lmao..Alright Bitch Boy, that was pretty funny....Leave you full of holes like 'your' wallet of money. (1)

Spit nothin but 'poetic' venom and straight scriputers....My shit leaves you in shocked up stuns like a "Polaroid Picture." (2)

Inflict yo life with nothing but 'non-sense' and harsh 'feelings'...I don't get fully hard? Your dick's as limp as banna 'peelings'. (3)

You can't even try to 'escape' yo 'fate' full of 'hate', or them 'shadwos' of you in R.Kelly's porno 'tapes'. (4)

C'mon bro did you really get pissed on? "Unload", the clip of 4/5ths and in 5 seconds be gone. (5)

I wouldn't have time to die?"Rephrase" yo sentence and lemme reply! Only way you'll come close to beatin me is a tie. (6)

I'll say it slow so you can understand the 'controversy', flip yo script so bad have you lookin like G-Unit beggin fo 'mercy'. (7)

Keystyle are my easiest thing to do, spit 'switch' styles of course, rapping comes so easy to me, I think of it as a sport. (8)

Split yo wigz wit notin but bricks, make sure that they come at you 'consitantly' - you in-experienced on the microphone son. (9)

Like a game of poker.I'm the better hand. An Ace vs. Spade - Remember that time you was bout to get pussy but u said u had aids? (10)

Switch Styles-
:Rep Yo City An Yo Block and see who gets knocked. (11)
:Keep talkin shit and get shot up like "Pac." (12)
:Fuck 'vocabulary' I can do wit out it, don't hit back. (13)
:*Constabulary*- You like a white boy in a situation wit cops all bla


HipHop101......Shorten ya lines up
Shit was so fuckin stretched....
Punches were decently hard
Vocab pretty good...wordplay was straight
Complexcity in the creativity area....
Shit was pretty dope... just shorten it up..
When ya switched ya style... That was good structure..
Overall...................13.5/20

Vote-HipHop101
He edged it........
Punches were dope
Vocab was hard....
Wordplay was good..

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