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Old 01-02-04, 03:15 AM   #7
Straight Ace
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CarsonJetX2
I simply expected more..
You had some ok punches..for an ok battle,
But u did not include the personals..to,
-What later on proved to be true- Xtreme's anger.
The flow & structure where on point..
Wordplay was there.. punches did not hit hard..enough.
Overall Ok.

Xtreme Diagnosis
Personals..
Started of well, funny openin' bar..
Your flow was shakey at points..But you totally,
Made up for it with your personals..
Instead of packin a bunch of random punches..
You basically assaulted Carson & did everything,
To degrade not just him..but his image aswell.
To my believes.. you as many would say 'ripped him'.
Overall Good.

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