wow the title didn't do the piece any justice..is Lizzie a real person? try a more emotional title, the word slut is so widely used that half the time it no longer has meaning..the poem itself was amazing though i know kids who go through depression like Lizzie did, and it is hard to get them back down to earth..i been depressed and its the worst feeling in the world...tell Lizzie 'keep her head up, legs closed and eyes open'

good work