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Old 01-02-04, 09:42 AM   #3
Antonio Banderas
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Some parts of your material flowed, then some bars seemed stretched to the point I had to read it twice.... U managed to squeeze out a 7/10 from me.....



To make this better, U might want to use a wider range of vocab, but this piece was nice.........
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