Ok. Firstly it was a nice drop. However it could have been made more emotional.. instead of comparing it to Detroid Car indrustries. that shit is ok for a battle but when you spilling your feelings i wouldnt use it.

But your flow it oright. It was a nice drop just next time blend with it more. Express yourself through it.

anyways no hate. keep doing your thing.

If you have time return the fevour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103155