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Old 01-02-04, 10:57 AM   #7
B.I.Detained
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both had rite idea but...
BREAKDOWN-
structure-Spek
flow-......
punches-spek
personals-....
wordplay-Deception
sustainment-None
enjoyment-both
overall-Spekta

both----dont use capitals to highlight shit
and dont use shit like Warm Up...n Finisher etc
to signal beginnings and harder punches

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236
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