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Old 01-02-04, 11:07 AM   #2
B.I.Detained
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HMMMM NOT BAD AT ALL...still stayin short n snappy
spit!!!!!
BREAKDOWN---**oh oh oh..dont stop-HAMMER TIME!!
punches-Spit
flow-spit
complexity-Bio
sustainment-spit
enjoyment-both
metas-spit
structure-spit
overall-Spit

clear to see here that he jus put more effort
in and that tight structure gave a good flow
pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING MAD SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236
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