Yes, very well-written, contrary to the beliefs of Lord Baron & Co.
Of course, as it has become the trademark of a Demik written, vocabulary & satire seemed to dominate the majority of this piece. There were plenty of quotables, but a few were especially intriguing:
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That's just an awful case scenario, the apex of train wrecks
I hate this! Being that Earth is just an alias for fray rests
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After your explanation, I think that this was a particularly relevant & innovative line.
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We've driven the Styx in, we all listen, just don't pay interest
word was never born, Mother Nature was on the pill during sex
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Again, a satirical metaphor utilized to perfection. .
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In a bid for reprisal, confidence uprising is held at eBay
we stay contorted, extorted in sum, for some there's hell to pay
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(copy & paste previous praise)
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Stuck in the same....phase, with different behavior patterns
I'm timed out for a New York minute, but why stay in Manhatten?
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This was my favorite line of all, & I am still wondering how the hell a damned British national could convey such a concept. Have you been to New York? Because that would be a commonplace sentiment in the likes of you & yours, I'm sure. .
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And they failed to merit from life, confused like foreign homage
as to why people assume living is beautiful was common knowledge.
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Of course, the conclusion is full of luster, as always.
Cheers, good read, deserving of Hall of Fame honors, I am sure. I like the new Soundclick track, too - it's a Badmajik production, is it not? Post more @ Rb, please.