represented soft focus with a great piece one more time! I dont really know the whole story behind jesus all that well, but i like the way you wrote about it. good detail, and good flow to it. did i good job telling the story and making it understandable for ppl like me who dont know the story already. i liked the end of it the most, where you take what you said in the story to say how we need to help each other more. nice write

~Tera~
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