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Old 01-02-04, 01:40 PM   #9
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This was a very good piece. I felt the detail and the way you put this together was really good. The Structure was good the vocabulary was good but your rhyme scheme was great. This was a really good poem right through it wasn't boring at all well done, you put that together really well

Keep it up.

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