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Old 01-02-04, 03:05 PM   #5
Menik
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Yeah i agree this was a good drop.....enjoyed the read.....structure was good in this i thought.....your flow in this was good, it stayed on point through out the piece, never really got off....you had some good vocab i thought....you had some good wordplay....overall it was a good piece....keep at it.
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