Ok break down...
Nephew J
Wow elevated my man...Some times you had a rhyme scheme...then during your flow it just died out...poor structure and no punches....
RHYTHM 212
You atleast had some schemes and punches...
" could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit"
Was a good enough line to take him,.....and you literally killed him with two lines lol...no hate...
Nephew J....fam just try to get a better rhyme scheme and hard hitting punches....stay battling...
Vote:RHYTHM 212
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