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Old 01-02-04, 04:01 PM   #8
Bio*Chemist
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Ok break down...

Nephew J

Wow elevated my man...Some times you had a rhyme scheme...then during your flow it just died out...poor structure and no punches....


RHYTHM 212

You atleast had some schemes and punches...

" could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit"

Was a good enough line to take him,.....and you literally killed him with two lines lol...no hate...

Nephew J....fam just try to get a better rhyme scheme and hard hitting punches....stay battling...

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