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Old 01-02-04, 04:23 PM   #25
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Quote:
Originally posted by $pitacular
check it,

EyE chalk the "Q" stick & knock the 8-ball in the pocket...
You wouldn't be Live… if you stuck your Cock in a Socket
Some thought you Couldn't lose… but I never doubted ya
I can tell from your Verse… I bring the Worst outta ya
On the DL you treat a Dick like Lorena… you Bob-it
Like kids off punishment… I got U commin out the Closet
Aww shit… I done crossed the Tease and dotted ya EyEs
Your rhymes are so Shitty… that it brought all the Flies
U pulled ya Straps & hurt ya self… cuz now ya Bra's 2 tight
Must Pen ya shit Left-Handed… cuz I never seen you Right


Pretty dope shit...
Flow was good...Punches were decent
Personals....not many......
Vocab needs to be brought in
Wordplay was decent...
Overall......15.5/20





Quote:
Originally posted by EyE QuE
..Our ranks in this battle are Q¹ & Spit² looks like ya numbers-up..
..Ya delivery is wooden & i'm board of it like it was a lumber-truck..
..Must suck to have as much bad luck as you do with findin crews..
..Only methods you man-factured is controlling your anger when you lose..
..Your verses wouldn't be ill if they were backward free-posts..
..Ya spit so wack ya internet access has been cut off by ya i.s.p. host..
..My bars pierce through layers-of-skin..spits constantly on his knees praying-to-win..
..Decayin-your-limbs..this battle costing-you-to-lose..as if you were paying-for-sin..
..How many executives do you need to battle to relize ya skill level..
..Lost to a kid & you get ripped by bid..what would I do to a minature aaron nevel..


Dope verse..
Flow was good...
Personals were perfect... coulda used more
Punches hit nice and hard
Vocab....needs work..
Overall.....17/20


Sorry $pitacular..
But EyE QuE edged you over with punches & personals
Both verses were very enjoyable...
Dope battle

Vote-EyE QuE
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