iight, battle waz decent, lot of played out lines from both MC's but ill do my best,

Nephew J's verse:

coudnt really fine any lines worth "quoting", bars were too short and not enought personals, but it did flow good, too many 3 and 4 letter simple words you rhymed with (EX: Grim-Dim, Cell-Tell)
try to improve you vocab a little bit


LM's Verse:

"Rap/jazz, to you it's all the same thats why your pathetic...
Plus your a fat bitch, always at your PC and not athletic..."

--good line, nice personal and vocab with the lyrics

"Your profile says you like write lyrics, BMX and kickbox...
You forgot to mention your gay and suck loads of cocks...
Fuck it do I really have to rap, I woulda won this if I just started to beat box..."


--also a good line, nice end peice, that beat box shit waz nice

overall LM's verse waz just flat out better that Nephew J's verse so he gets the vote

Vote: LM

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