lyrikal killa

Hoe Moe Flow, You Whuddup Joe
Spittin Sneakly Dekie, Your Mama Is Freaky
Ur Poppa Is Sneaky & Ur Sister Eats My Tweakie
I Fly So High Like Superman,So Die Now Jay- Z Fan
Your Gay, Inifinity Times Two, Stupid Slu
Fo, I Smack Your Whack Tract's To Trippin Tracks
Slacks Are Silvery Smooth, Suckity Suck Suck Suck
I Bit, Indite Slight Fights Wit Great Mite To Enlight
You Fake Fuckin HomoSexual Wannabe Thug
I Hit You Wit My Louisville Slug.

Eat Dat. Hoe. Moe.

weak very weak played out played out gay jokes nothing really stood out you need elevatin


RHYTHM 212

Murk wit eas....
Only time u blazed up is when u payed fo trees
And like alias death, hoe this was plane to sea
This guy cant rap..i would kill him wit two lines
But This verse would get dq'd.....
.... and than that fag wont die
Right now ya already dead..dont need to go on
Dumb as fuck - callin me joe so i guess ill call u john
Lyrically rapin u...even though its played its true
Mine as well call me a fortune teller....
...cuz this verse is verbal voodoo
We standin eye to eye, u then show ya real fear
Cuz You moving weight....
...is like pushing fat joe ina wheel chair


well also weak but between the two this dawg take it with harder pounches better opener and closer like its been said you need work on structure work on it and your ryhme would flow better

overall vote rhythm

hit the battles in my sig i took the the time

peace