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Old 01-02-04, 06:49 PM   #19
dough hostile
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half ya shit didnt even rhyme..not a punch was thrown
simple rhyme scheme like tryin to rhyme dad wit dome
i could kill ya wit too lines, just another dumb fuck kid
surround ya wit bullet proof glass, u would still get hit
"May all the real thugz RIP", nah you aint real, u wack
cant kill me,im ya uncle...u dead nephew for talin back
tryin to kick box wit god.......
....you a star? well my rhymes is leavin you sunned
Try ya style: not-rhyming-words, u wack bitch//
...For that ya life is Done

Punches were decently hard
Wordplay wasn't that great
Personals...not many
Flow...good..
Creativity....straight...
You win.


Win= Ryhtm