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Old 01-02-04, 07:21 PM   #3
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I bring wack heads down,now kid ur leavin life
Cuz im waklin all over ur flow like jesus christ
I punch quick, u dont even block,what is ur sights dulled?
Cuz ill give 'wits end' like i' knocked out the lightbulb'(idea)*
Shit you dont win fair, u get dickriden all the time
and I only see one answer 'the way u keepin ur hoes in line'*
Ill punch ya chest and squeeze ya lungs so u cant breathe right
so you kno this 'herb' recieves more 'hits' then a 'weed pipe'
Underground is dark wack fuck, only shine u get is from a night light
Your skills so low that you cant even see im on another level of height right?

Flow was kinda choppy
Punches were good at some points
Structure was choppy.....
Wordplay needs work
But your verse was ok
Overall.......12/20




Jay Pana

I'll Shit On SoE. .No! You Can't Beat Me
I'll Merk You, We'll Call It Part 2, Of Your Boring Trilogy
I'll Put You Thru Misery, I Shouldn't Of Agreed To This
Cuz I'ma Beat This Kid So Bad, People Will Think This Was Fixed
Punches Hittin Ya Lip. .Here's Another Fact
He Couldn't Catch No One's Attention, If He Claimed He Was Shaq
Fuck it...I'll Give You A Chance And Leave It At Eight
He Couldn't Live Up To His Name If We Battled In Legends...Too Late


LMFAO..got some funny lines
Punches were straight
Flow was pretty good
Real nice Creativity
Overall.................15/20


Vote-Jay Pana...
His verse was just funnier
Punches hit a bit harder
weak battle tho....


[b]Best Line

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Quoted from Jay Pana

Punches Hittin Ya Lip. .Here's Another Fact
He Couldn't Catch No One's Attention, If He Claimed He Was Shaq


^^Shit was hilaroius^^
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