Phoeniix
To be totally honest..
You had the better verse &,
If it wudnt have been for the fact,
Half of it is played, u would've won.
I mean the 'retirment' personals..They're not even personals,
Anymore..its just a concept now..i've heared it all before..
Same goes for the Kodak lines.. thats a petty.
You could have atleast came different on certain subjects..but it was all the same..reminded me of a old battle.
The verse itself was nice but obviously ill extract alot of points for the above givin reasons.
Overall Ok.

CarsonJet
Again ill be totally honest..
I thought u didnt came with anythin special..
No extremely funny or hard hittin personals,
Yet u came creative unlike Nixx..so thats good.
The closer was ok, cudve used some rewordin'..
But overall ok verse.. & u take this cause of more originality.
Overall Ok.

vote CarsonJet