Thread: Mind Expansion {Keystyle}
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Old 01-02-04, 08:02 PM   #3
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Good Piece, It had a lot of good detailed lines and some really good rhymes The structure was off but your rhyme scheme made up for it and easy to follow, so you did good man keep it up pz
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